Just a beautiful sequence. I don't remember it hitting as hard the first time around, but there is something unmistakably capital-M Magical about it. It's as powerful as it is subtle. Really phenomenal work, especially considering how early on the path you were at the time of writing.
ahhhh, thanks so much man. i really appreciate that. getting it right was the goal with this exercise: it works as a character study, but nailing down a subtle and realistic portrayal of magic was the real prize. i'm glad it's working for you.
Just a beautiful sequence. I don't remember it hitting as hard the first time around, but there is something unmistakably capital-M Magical about it. It's as powerful as it is subtle. Really phenomenal work, especially considering how early on the path you were at the time of writing.
ahhhh, thanks so much man. i really appreciate that. getting it right was the goal with this exercise: it works as a character study, but nailing down a subtle and realistic portrayal of magic was the real prize. i'm glad it's working for you.